workshop (writing)

                          The first story

Time: 17^th/11/2012

Place: go to the railway direction

People: A and B

There are two Asian girls walking so fast. They are going to the railway station direction. A walks ahead, she carries a big bag, she also wears a pair of glasses, jeans and sport shoes. B follows her, she takes a big blue suitcase, wears a white dress. At this time, frontal A says:“hurry up! We just have 5 minutes!” So that they began run. They seem like the Chinese oversea students, perhaps they will have a trip. They arrive the railway station, they need use ticket machine, but they do not know how to use it. Just have 4 minutes the train will leave. They ask the staff, a man quickly help them get tickets. They run on after they get tickets. They just have 3 minutes. Eventually, they arrive the platform, and wait for the train. They find the ticket show that the train arrives here at 6:20, but now has been 6:19:45, there is no train at all！A this time A find the train stays at the opposite platform! It seems like they go the wrong way! They have to run to another platform. When they arrive and get on the train. A ask a passenger:“ The train will go to the London, is not it?” The passenger says:“no, in opposite platform.” And then B ask the driver, driver also says the same words. Unfortunately, they have to run on again! When they arrive at the original platform, time is 6:24. They find the train gradually come here. Actually, the train just late 4 minutes.