workshop (writing)

                     The first story (sequel)

Time：17^th/11/2012 morning

Place: platform and carriage

People: A and B

They look their tickets that their carriage number is N. So that they began to look for N, they run from the front of the train to the end. However, there is no N! The train will start at once. So they just get on a carriage which is next to the carriage M. After they are into the carriage they are very happy because the screen in the carriage shows that this is the carriage N. And then they look for their seats. There are two European old women sat their seats. B says:“Sorry, ladies, these seats are ours.” She shows her ticket for them. A native woman says:“The outside of the train shows that this is carriage A, and my ticket also is A. So this is my seat.” A says:“But you see, the screen shows this is carriage N and also it next to the M. So this is N’s seat.” The two European women stare them, no more speaking, just sat the seats, don’t move. A and B have to go to the one side of the carriage, it is very crowded, there are many people also having the same problem, their seats have been already taken. A and B show their tickets for the staff. But he does not care about it. He walked off after he talks to an interphone. A and B sat the worker’s seat having a rest. They find, standees who their seats have been taken are all Asian guys, except a middle aged black women. After a while, the worker comes here, he says to A and B:“Sorry, you cannot sat here.” They have to stand up, and they find sitting people are all the white race. B says:“What up?” The black woman next to her, says:“You cannot do anything, you have to stand here!” 4 hour later, arrive at London, most people get off. At this time, the voice box in the carriage sounds: “I am sorry today the railway station’s computer system have problem……” A says:“I really despair about British train.” And then they get off.